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Sentences 1 and I use your offices at 14 Wall St.three or four days a week.I use both during office hours and after office hours.
The most effective combination of sentences 1 and 2 would include which group of words?
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Sentence 1Because I am working on tight deadlines, having building access at all times is essential.
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Which revision would improve the effectiveness of this letter?
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Sentence 6:We begin the session and gave you guidance that will help you decide what kinds of jobs are suitable, given your current skills.
Which correction should be made to sentence 6?
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Sentence 8:When I request a slip, he often tells me that I don’t need one because he knows me, as I leave, he then asks me for one and requests my identification card.
Which is the best way to write the underlined portion of this sentence? If the original is the best way, choose optionA.
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Sentence During the course of her employment with Ryan Industries is when Elena has received two bonuses and a number of commendations from our customers.
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Sentence With this mailing, we happy to extend an offer to renew your policy.
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Sentence 10:The seedlings are later transported by truck to a local distribution center for delivery to your home.
Which correction should be made to sentence 10?
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Sentence 16:If you live in a dry climate, consider, slow-growing, drought-tolerant plants as an alternative to grass.
Which correction should be made to sentence 16?
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Sentence 7:This preparation will make the painting process going much more smoothly.
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Sentence 1I can be reached at home (213) 239-8206 after 5:00 P.M., or you may leave a message on my answering machine or e-mail.
Which revision should be made to the placement of sentence 11?
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Sentence These books and brochures contain valuable tips take you through the steps of successful job searching.
The most effective revision of sentence 5 would include which group of words?
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Sentence Unfortunately, what went up do not always come back down, with the result that Mount Everest has a major trash problem today.
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Sentence 10:If you failed to remit the repayment by the specified date, Revenue Canada is empowered to take steps to retrieve the overpayment.
Which correction should be made to sentence 10?
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Which revision would improve the effectiveness of paragraph A?
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Sentence 9:Emergency teams have reported valuable information about CO levels, for example, one metropolitan area experienced a problem with CO levels that caused hundreds of alarms to go off during the first season they were available.
Which is the best way to write the underlined portion of this sentence? If the original is the best way, choose optionA.
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Sentence 7:This not only removes some stress, but it also has provided insurance in case of damage, breakage, or loss.
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Sentence 1As an employee, any organization would be proud to have someone like her.
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Sentence 8:The construction superintendent estimating that it will take a month to complete the garage addition, which will provide 30 new parking spaces.
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Sentence 1This statement applies not just to those employees in the factory to all of your personnel.
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Sentence 9:Normally we try to pay invoices within twenty days of receiving them, in this case, we will not pay any of the charges until you have provided us with a clear explanation of the bill.
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Sentence 1Do we want to loose our local shoe, clothing, and variety stores?
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Sentence 1All participants will be critiqued on there appearance and interview.
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Sentence Our developer B & B Real Estate Corporation, has looked at the rental records and has noticed that the tenants have maintained a good credit history with Sunny Park.
Which correction should be made to sentence 5?
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Sentence 20:If we continue to receive complaints regarding inappropriate workstation behavior, management, will have to find a better means of controlling the situation.
Which correction should be made to sentence 20?.
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Sentence 1We would be honored by you’re presence.
Which correction should be made to sentence 14?
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Sentence 1You should use a pointed brush for edging at the ceiling, or a special edging tool.
The most effective revision of sentence 14 would include which group of words?
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Sentence 1You should also have a good supply of manure or compost to mix with the soil, and these materials should be included with the soil when you pack the soil around the root ball.
The most effective revision of sentence 15 would begin with which group of words?
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Sentence Last week, a bill dated January 15, for the amount of $634.00, was received here from your office.
Which is the most effective revision of sentence 1?
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Sentence Although not specifically stated, apparently this “Invoice and Statement” also seems to be a ticket to a football game.
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Sentence I am writing to you on behalf of the Galena Arts Academy.
Which correction should be made to sentence 1?
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Sentence 1When I tried contacting your branch office in Tucson, we got a message telling me that the number was out of service.
Which is the best way to write the underlined portion of this sentence? If the original is the best way, choose optionA.
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Sentence As you know, Montgomery is home to many artists and who volunteer their time to work at the Galena Arts Academy with the children as a part of the city-wide Volunteer Artists’ Program.
Which correction should be made to sentence 2?
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Sentences 10 and 1This will ensure a professional look.The look will be smooth.
The most effective combination of sentences 10 and 11 would include which group of words?
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Sentence 1When you receive your seedlings, its essential that you plant them immediately.
Which correction should be made to sentence 12?
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Which sentence would be most effective if inserted at the beginning of paragraph D?